Thursday, September 2, 2010

Letting Go

After complaining about not writing yesterday, this woke me up in the middle of the night.  Be careful of what you wish for?











Letting Go

With a leaf, I craft a tiny boat,
Stock it with the shadow of memories
and one acorn.

At the water's edge, I see
reflections of lost dreams and hopes,
piercing as thorns.

Close to the surface, I hold
what needs to be washed away
but cannot let go.

Above the chill water, I raise
my arms to the darkening oaks,
then, slowly, know.

In the middle of the stream, I bend,
dripping heartache onto the boat,
as it is claimed by the current.

Each end is a beginning.
This beginning is a gift of that end.
Now I let go.

2 comments:

  1. Your first stanza is especially lovely, I think; it creates an image immediately and carries your poem's message well. The feeling here runs deep.

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  2. Each end is a beginning.
    This beginning is a gift of that end.
    Now I let go.

    Oh my!

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